Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori
-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.
Choose one of the images to prompt a piece of descriptive writing
Hi Kayden
ReplyDeleteI was really impressed with how well you worked on this piece of writing. It was great to see that you took the idea of a scary clown story like IT and you could then turn it into your own piece of writing. The main thing you needed help with was just some prompting to go back and add more detail and punctuation and some help with how to end it. You came up with some great description like, " When I took my first step in, my blood was cold, the lights were rusty ,the stairs were broken. There were cobwebs in the top corners of the house. "
You can be really proud of this piece of writing. Well done.