Friday, 17 August 2018

Beach poem

We are learning to use destriptive words in our writing. We are learning to make the reader think of the story we think of it.
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  1. Anonymous27 August 2018 at 10:27

    Hi Kayden it is me Luken, I like the order you put your beach recount in. You found lots of rubbish on the beach. If you wanted to look at my learning blog, it is http://karorolukenr.blogspot.com

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  2. Anonymous31 August 2018 at 10:33

    hi i am ted from owairaka school room 18 i see you are saiving the world bye cleaning are you? and yes you are that ios great! amaizing! bye! oh yes and here is my blog copy it and paste it in google bye! https://odsfedorz.blogspot.com/

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    1. Anonymous4 September 2018 at 10:05

      Yes my whole class is and we did it in groups. I'd love to look at your Blog some time soon.

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  3. Anonymous31 August 2018 at 10:36

    Hi my name is nuradiin from Owairaka District School. I see you enjoyed cleaning the beach you could try making the picture more clear so people can see it clearly.and here is my blog https://odsnuradiink.blogspot.com/

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  4. Anonymous11 September 2018 at 10:19

    Hi Nuradiin thanks for telling me that I should show the picture more clearer and for letting me go to your blog I would like to see what you have done on your blog.

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  5. Anonymous11 September 2018 at 10:34

    Hi Kayden it is James from Karoro School i like your writing but next time maybe write some more.

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  6. Anonymous17 September 2018 at 09:39

    Ok thanks for talling me that

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