Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
One day, my class listened to our teacher read a story called Kensuke's Kingdom. It was about a family going on a Journey around the world #
Well done Kayden. You've included some thoughtful points in your critique. Next time, it would be great to challenge yourself, when you use screen castify, to look up at the camera sometimes. Ka pai.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Well done Kayden. You've included some thoughtful points in your critique. Next time, it would be great to challenge yourself, when you use screen castify, to look up at the camera sometimes. Ka pai.
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